hello_zukohere

So here be that wonderful "How's My Driving?" post. I love this character to bitses, and wanna play him to the best of my abilities. So. Guys. Am I doing him justice? Any comments/suggestions/crit is more than appreciated!! S.V.P. Flamery is not appreciated btw >:|

<3s for all,

Muffin

and Zuko.

Also, comments are screened. ^_^

p.s. for those who know his canon, in case you somehow didn't realize (I'd say the lj name is a dead giveaway but anyway) he's book 3/awkward/fail!good!Zuko.

... Catty, that was the first and last time I'll ever let you convince me to take part in something so ridiculous.

For anyone who had to suffer through whatever nonsense my alter ego was spurting, I apologize.



At least I got out of dancing, but... uggh.

Oh, how alarming this all is! I fear I may just faint at the thought.

...

Someone! Fetch me a ham sandwich!
Or perhaps some hay, if there's none to be had. There is of course nothing like eating that when you're faint.

Not going.

I have better stuff to do than waste time coming up with the perfect a costume.

So. Catty.

I'm sorry. Want ice cream?  Wait no too blunt-

About the infirmary... I was a dick. But I'm really not... that much of one? Okay so maybe that's kind of a lie but I didn't mean to be and I want to make it up to you and show you that I'm not one... even though I just said I was.  What the hell was that

I have issues!  Uggh don't make this about yourself

I was a jerk and I'm sorry so I thought maybe could do something nice for you. But don't take in in the wrong way, you made it QUITE clear you have a boyfriend. Not that it matters because I don't like you anyway.. I mean in that way. Obviously I think you're nice because I wouldn't be saying sorry if I didn't...  UGGH YOU'RE SUCH AN IDIOT.

Hey, Catty.

I know I was a really big jerk to you when we were stuck in the infirmary together. And I want to let you know that I feel really bad about it, because you didn't deserve it especially when I made you cry. All you ever were was nice and... yeah I was an idiot, okay?

We got off on the wrong foot. And it's my fault, so I want to make it up to you. And now that I'm actually out of that bed I can do more than just complain talk. Girls like sweets and that kind of junk, right? Uh, so I was thinking, do you want ice cream or something? Oh yeah and I'm sorry I think I forgot to say that.

Zuko
But I guess that was unnecessary and kind of obvious since it's my journal and all...



((ooc: Strikes are scribbles of frustration. It kinda is obvious he was struggling to come up with something, but yeah they're pretty much illegible, strikes//underlines just huge blotches))

Uncle is… no… NO! This is some kind of… I didn’t even…

YOU’RE NOT SUPPOSED TO DIE. I still need you Why’d you have to- HOW could yo- UGGH YOU JERK.

… I ... that’s just the way of things, isn’t it…? … But why’d it have to happen when I wasn’t even around to…




((OOC: all this in a barely legible scrawl. And the strikes = exaggerated scribblings))